hi i like it just wondering, i see you are not putting the parents names is it something you don't want or forgot,and is there a dance to follow the reception,and do you want a RSVP. just a couple of things i taugh about. tea
Love the look! but the wording needs work... like... you start by saying "their families", so you're talking in the 3rd person here, but right after you say "join US for OUR wedding" so now you're in 2nd person. So either make it all 3rd person (join THEM for THEIR wedding) or all 2nd person (and OUR families)
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hi i like it just wondering, i see you are not putting the parents names is it something you don't want or forgot,and is there a dance to follow the reception,and do you want a RSVP.
just a couple of things i taugh about.
tea
haha, I just noticed that I forgot to 'l' in 'clock'. Ooops!
hi Sissa, I love it, it is so you, simply stated but very elegant
i say "ya" !!
i love them!!! they look good!
i like it... its simple but oh so pretty...
Love the look! but the wording needs work... like... you start by saying "their families", so you're talking in the 3rd person here, but right after you say "join US for OUR wedding" so now you're in 2nd person. So either make it all 3rd person (join THEM for THEIR wedding) or all 2nd person (and OUR families)
:)
I wanna go! wahhhh
the design is stunnning!
Love the design!
love the design!
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